The LITTLE Things by Jerry Simmons

As you might know, the head of a company survived 9/11 because his son started kindergarten. Another fellow was alive because it was his turn to bring donuts.

One woman was late because her alarm clock didn’t go off in time.  One was late because of being stuck on the NJ Turnpike because of an auto accident. One of them missed his bus.  One spilled food on her clothes and had to take time to change. One’s car wouldn’t start.  One went back to answer the telephone.  One had a child that dawdled and didn’t get ready as soon as he should have. One couldn’t get a taxi.   The one that struck me was the man who put on a new pair of shoes that morning, took the various means to get to work but before he got there, he developed a blister on his foot. He stopped at a drugstore to buy a Band-Aid. That is why he is alive today.

Now when I am stuck in traffic, miss an elevator, turn back to answer a ringing telephone…All the little things that annoy me. I think to myself, this is exactly where I am supposed to be at this very moment…Next time your morning seems to be going wrong, the children are slow getting dressed, you can’t seem to find the car keys, you hit every traffic light, don’t get mad or frustrated; take refuge in the fact that someone is at work watching over you.

May your guardian angel continue to bless you with all those annoying little things and may you remember their possible purpose. – Author Unknown

Make Writing Your Only Plan by David Farland

During last week’s episode of “The Voice,” a reality television show where young singers compete for a recording contract, one of the judges, rock star Adam Levine, gave a critique of one singer’s performance. He said something that I thought was interesting. He told the young singer, “I love the fact that you give it your all. You have no backup plan, and that’s important. If you’re going to make it in this cutthroat business, you can’t have a backup plan.” This is something that I noticed long ago. Many people want to become writers, and many of them have a tremendous amount of talent. But almost always, the young writer decides that he needs a backup plan. For example, he might say, “I’ll take a job as a tech writer and plan to write on the side.” Or “I’ll take a job as a computer programmer or work as a dentist.” Eventually, the writer finds himself with a career, and his writing gets shoved back further and further in to the corners, never to escape. Very often, after years of regret, the writer will try to make a go of writing, but she’ll often find that the constraints of family expenses and the time involved just don’t allow for a transition to a writer’s life. The dream may soon be gone forever, becoming nothing more than regret. As a college student, I studied several things in my early years. I was a straight-A student in marketing and business management for a year, but then went to pre-med. Though I’d worked as a butcher when young, I found that I didn’t have the stomach to become a surgeon, and so I began looking seriously at my backup plan—writing. Perhaps I could make writing my primary plan and do something else if it didn’t work out. I quit studying medicine and dove into writing, thinking that if I couldn’t sell my writing, I’d perhaps take a job as an editor. Well, the writing career took off much faster than expected, and my “backup plans” were cast by the wayside. Oh, I do still do some editing and teaching but mainly for fun. A guy has got to get out of the house once in a while. But I keep myself focused on writing, and here’s my backup plan: more writing. By that I mean simply, I’m going to write what I like. And if that doesn’t work, I’ll write some more. I’m finishing the last book of the Runelords series, and then I’ll work on the next book in the Nightingale series. When I’m done with that, I have three other novels that I want to write, and a fourth that I’m hatching. I have faith that one of these projects will take off big. I’ve found that this is the only sane way to work in this business. Write, and then write some more. So if you see your writing as a backup plan, figure out how to make it your career. Give it a little more emphasis. Attack your writing with a little more ferocity. Whatever else you may be doing, whatever other occupation you have, start looking at it as your backup plan. If you’re stocking shelves in a grocery store, see it as a means to an end. Remember that you’re a writer first. You only stock shelves to pay the bills until your writing career takes off. Then make sure that each day, your writing takes precedence. That means that you start the day with your writing, when you’re full of energy and fresh ideas. You don’t try to do it just in those few stolen moments when you really “feel like it.” Start making money with your writing, and then make writing your only plan.

Make Every Word Count by Stephen Wilber

Make every word count - or as Strunk and White famously advised in The Elements of Style, "Omit needless words."

Consider this sentence: "Due to the fact that we ran out of gas, we were two hours late for our meeting."

Can you identify the needless words? (My first version of the previous sentence read, "Can you identify the words that were used needlessly?")

Look again. The sentence contains a phrase that, as reported by E. B. White, made his former college professor William Strunk "quiver with revulsion."

Although your reaction may not be as visceral as Professor Strunk's, I suspect you can identify the non-functioning words. To make every word count, replace the wordy phrase due to the fact that with the word because.

How would you revise the following sentence?

"Due to the fact that our profits remained flat in the third quarter, the board reduced our CEO's salary by $50 million and used those dollars to increase the salary of our 500 account managers by $100,000 each."

  

The phrase the fact that can almost always be replaced with a simple but useful word: because. So too can the phrases based on the fact that, in view of the fact that, and owing to the fact that. Similarly, the phrase in spite of the fact that can be replaced with although or even though.

With these patterns of wordiness in mind, how would you condense these three sentences?

1. "Based on the fact that I love snow, I'm eager for winter to come."

2. "Many people choose to live in Minnesota in spite of the fact that they don't like snow or cold weather."

3. "In view of the fact that it snows every winter in Minnesota, and usually in significant quantities, I'm perplexed by their decision to live here."

Do your revisions look like this?

1. "Because I love snow, I'm eager for winter to come."

2. "Many people choose to live in Minnesota even though they don't like snow or cold weather."

3. "Because it snows every winter in Minnesota, and usually in significant quantities, I'm perplexed by their decision to live here."

By the way, if you were taught it's incorrect to begin a sentence with because, you were misled. Beginning a sentence with because is perfectly acceptable as long as you complete the sentence -- that is, as long as you don't put a period after the dependent because clause and create a sentence fragment.

Five Secrets of Success in a Down Economy

Whether your company is large or small, when you offer a valuable product or service you can succeed. Even in a down economy. You may work with a franchise, or promote skills as a consultant. You may work as an employee of a local firm or promote products that are household names. Whatever your labors, apply the following principles and your business will excel.

1)                 Love Your Job: When you really enjoy what you do, you look forward to the jangle of the alarm clock, each morning. If you feel numb, bored, chronically tired or even depressed when thinking about work, change either your attitude or your profession. OK – maybe love is too strong a word. Maybe enthusiasm or respect fit our professional lives better. But, whatever vocation you invest in, make sure it has long-term appeal.   

2)                 The Customer is King: Whatever you do for a living, the customer is always king. Remember, a client will “chat up” forty people about a bad experience but only twenty when singing your praises. Once, I made the mistake of asking a customer to go to the rear of the line to return her product, instead of shoving in front of 8 people that were already waiting ahead of her. It seemed a reasonable request for courtesy, until I got a letter from the corporate CEO…her father! In an effort to get me fired, he sent a dozen “secret shoppers” into my department to test my customer service skills. This backfired and I hit five stars for customer excellence in record time. It taught me an important lesson. When the customer is treated like gold, gold flows into your pocket.

3)                 Get Your Company Name Out: A “down economy” is a great time to advertise or promote PR. Why? Because no one else is doing it. Your company name is emblazoned across the local business horizon, just as others timidly retract all mention of products and services. This pays off with great dividends, over time. And, don’t kid yourself; it has short-term benefits, too. When you follow-up an article, ad or press release with a phone campaign (either B2B or B2C), the chances of closing a sale double and triple. So, don’t hide in the shadows during a down economy. Leap into the spotlight and benefit by being center stage!

4)                 Take Time to Serve: Serving your community during hard times builds loyalty and generates great word-of-mouth. Pick something you really enjoy, like the local Boys and Girls Club, your regional library or the city shelter for family support. You won’t need to donate money, either. Just go dressed in company T-shirts or wearing in-office nametags. Then, you can rake leaves, repaint walls or collect cans of food, while quietly advertising that your company cares! It’s amazing how many appreciative people you meet when serving. Out-of-the-blue your firm may be nominated for an award or receive unexpected encomiums. Most often these acts of service are their own reward.

5)                 Embrace an Honest Work Ethic: This doesn’t mean working harder. It means working with street-smart old-fashioned ethics. During a down economy it’s especially important to give honor where honor is due. Keep an eye out for those that make creative contributions, work overtime or provide consistent cheerful support. When you recognize those that go the extra mile, team members close ranks. They work even harder to make sure your company succeeds. Taking the blame yourself (when appropriate) and giving praise to others when they excel creates an atmosphere of loyal teamwork that sets you firmly on the yellow brick road. By the way, this is a great time to catch “kudo thieves” and send them packing. Employees that stab their fellows in the back to gain points or ride rough shod over other team members (gossip is an overused tool) are better employed by your competitors. During hard times, you don’t need the chaos they cause.

Applying these five secrets can promote lasting success. You may be surprised by the harmony, even the serendipity, which follows! 

Finding the Courage to Write by Dave Wolverton

I decided to begin writing at the age of 17. I bought a used typewriter and began my first fantasy novel--a story about a young wizard who goes to a magic school.

I was terrified that someone might actually read it, so I hid the manuscript under my mattress. I’ve sometimes imagined my mother’s reaction when, upon changing my sheets, she felt that suspicious pad of paper. “Oh, what kind of a twisted little pervert am I raising?” she might have wondered. Imagine her surprise when she pulled out the wad and found that instead of reading Playboy, I was writing a novel!

(I can hear her muttering under her breath, “What kind of twisted little nerd am I raising?”)

A year later, I moved out of the house--mainly so that I could write without getting caught. One day a friend dropped by and noticed my nicely typed manuscript sitting next to my typewriter. “Oh, you’re writing a book!” he said enthusiastically. “Let me see!” But as he reached for the manuscript, instinct took control, and I did a belly flop on the table in order to hide my labors.

That was many millions of words ago. Yet I see people with similar fears every day. Once a father brought his son to one of my signings, a young man who was secretly writing his own novel. Dad knew, and was trying to get him to come out of the closet.

A good friend of mine wrote five novels before he got the courage to submit one to a publisher. (It was a great book, and it became a bestseller!) A young author I met at a panel was shaking when she sat down. I asked if she was all right, and she said, “I’m afraid that they’ll know that I’m not really an writer.”

This fear of showing your work is common. It’s similar to one of our most fundamental fears--that of speaking in public. Oddly enough, surveys show that more people are afraid of speaking in public than of dying. But if you’re going to live your dream, if you’re going to become a bestseller, you need to show your work to the whole world. You’ll need to develop the guts to show your work to a critique group.

You’ll need to find the courage to send your story to an editor. You’ll need to find the inner resolve to read the reviews of critics, and to stand against the tides of public opinion. You’ll need to brave a book signing on a cold winter’s day when no one will show up. You’ll need to dig deep and find the strength to quit your day job and take the risk of making storytelling your profession. It won’t be comfortable. You might even regret it. But I suspect that you’ll regret it more bitterly if you never try.

So here’s writing tip number one: Begin developing courage today. Stop doing swan dives on your keyboard. If you’re really insecure, show your story to someone who loves you. Maybe you could tell your colleagues at work or at school that you want to be a writer. Tell your parents what you’ve got hidden under your mattress. If you feel safe enough, join a writing group. If you’re beyond that stage, send a manuscript out to an editor--a really scary one. But whatever you resolve to do, do it today!

Your Unique Gift

In an age of rush and bustle, it's easy to assume that our words, either written or spoken, have little value. The opposite is true! Today, we can Facebook, Twitter and Blog our opinions to hundreds, even thousands, of people, through the power of technology. We can also influence those we love, one-on-one.

No one is perfect. But, everyone has perfectly inspiring words and thoughts to share.

Your unique gift, your point of view, is expressed in your words. So, write them, speak them, share them. It is generous and kind to share an uplifting thought or tale with others. It can help them more than you know.

Recently, I went through my journals. During my growing  years, my passion for writing was dismissed by certain relatives. I pursued it in spite of strictures to be more practical, slogging through the slough of criticism instead of rising on wings of praise. Yet, in one journal entry, I was surprised to read that my example of writing had inspired my sister to write books.

What greater gift can we give to one another than our words, thoughts and examples? Share your soul through your words. You, and others in your world, with be better for it.

Put Your Story in Motion by Farland

From David Farland’s Daily Kick in the Pants

Have you ever read a story that just stalled on you? The character isn’t going anywhere, doing anything, or thinking or saying anything new? Did you notice that you wanted to put the book down? In fact, if you’re like me, you probably did put the book down . . . and you’ll never pick it up again. Humans and animals respond to motion. It’s in our DNA. Anything that moves is either a potential threat, potential food, a potential mate, or a potential ally. That’s why you need to keep your story in motion. When it stalls, it’s as interesting as a dirt clod. So how do you keep your story in motion? Here are a few things that you can do. 1) Keep your characters moving. Simply having characters stride purposefully (not wander aimlessly) across a room will add some motion. Putting them to work, having them racing for their lives—all are good options. 2) Create characters who act. Some people in this world simply react. When faced with an imminent threat, they’ll respond, and that alone is enough for a plot to work. But such people are a bit predictable. It’s much more interesting to have characters who set goals, who struggle to achieve, who think outside the box and act decisively. 3) Create emotional movement. A scene where a character’s feelings change dramatically—for example a scene where a young woman’s anger toward her father is replaced by sadness when she learns of his death—is much more interesting than a scene that is emotionally flat. You can create emotional movement in any direction—from envy to love, from humor to horror, from lust to disgust. 4) Create intellectual movement. Many writers have no intellectual component to their tales at all. It seems that the writer almost has no intellectual life. Yet a scene where a character learns something new, makes a discovery, or even just ponders an important theme will engage your reader intellectually and add some depth to your tale. This works best when you deal with universal themes and problems that strongly affect the reader. These philosophical discussions can be handled either as internal dialog, or you can have people arguing, or otherwise exchanging ideas. 5) Move your characters temporally. Too often writers are so “in the moment” that they forget to use temporal motion to their advantage. For example, imagine that your heroine is getting ready for a date. She decides to wear her “lucky” red dress. Why? Because the last two times that she fell in love, she was able to seduce the men that she wanted while wearing this red dress. If you were writing a romance, looking back in time would offer a great opportunity to deepen your character’s personality. In the same way, if I were writing a fantasy, I might want to take a couple of paragraphs to talk about a sword—discussing where it was forged, the conquests of past owners, it’s alleged powers, and so on, all in an effort to engage those fantasy readers who really like to become immersed in a fantasy world. 6) Put your characters together. Too often, I read scenes where a character is alone, but the opportunity for change, for movement, becomes limited. For example, an old woman sweeping her floor is likely to be fairly boring. But if you throw a serial killer in the basement, the level of interest will skyrocket. Whenever you have two characters together, it gives you a chance to let them argue, or even come to blows. Hence, one assignment that I often ask people to do in my writing workshops is to add an argument to your story. Characters should be like balls in a game of billiards—they should bounce off one another, get sent off in new directions in response to opposing forces. Far too often, I read about characters who should get together and they never do. For example, are you writing about a serial killer, and your detective never meets him before the climax? Boring. It’s much more interesting to get them together early on. The same often happens in epic fantasy, where a young hero face a godlike foe that he never sees. Figure out how to put them together in such a way that your hero comes out alive. 7) Change course. In a story, characters are often forced to respond to others, or to stimulate others. Thus, after your character loses a battle, he may have to regroup with his comrades, reconsider his plans, suffer through a dire funk, or make an excursion in order to ensure success at the next meeting. These “course correction” scenes are the meat of your story. 8) Create suspense by allowing your reader to have some doubt as to a probable outcome. When you’re writing, you as a writer usually know what is going to happen next. Your tone and word choice often act as tells, “foreshadowing” the upcoming actions. One great way to create suspense is to foreshadow a different ending. For example, you have a story about a young man who breaks horses for a living, and on a certain day, a horse finally breaks him—literally. It bucks him off and breaks his neck. How are you going to foreshadow this event? You might be tempted to start off with a gray day, with overcast skies and the taste of rain. You might have rumblings of thunder, and your character might feel “off” of his game. But there’s no surprise in that. So rethink how you’ll approach your scene. 9) Combine the techniques listed above. I remember years ago reading Flannery O’Connor’s masterpiece “A Good Man is Hard to Find.” It’s a story about an old woman who has been kidnapped. She’s taken into the woods by a pair of men who plan to kill her, and she thinks furiously about how she might be able to outrun them, outfight them, outwit them. She argues with them and plays upon her captor’s sympathies. She tells her captor that she knows that he’s “a good man,” for he does show her some kindness, and then he proves her wrong. The story has everything—intellectual movement, temporal motion, emotional movement, characters acting and reacting, while the audience is nicely balanced with suspense. In short, I found it absolutely engrossing as a teen. Certainly, there are a lot of great examples for you to look at, but consider your favorite scenes, and you will often find that all of these elements combine in your favorite scenes. In short, whenever your story suddenly stops—whether you do it purposefully or inadvertently—your reader will stop reading. Your challenge is to keep the story moving!

What is a Writer?

A writer isn’t just anyone that can pick-up a pencil and scratch words on paper. A writer is someone with either the skill or talent to write with purpose and power.

Great writing is done in many ways, with literary language or simple words. There is no yardstick for such greatness, except the response of the heart.

Although artistic writing can be done by anyone (meaning poems, meditations, etc.), a professional writer has a passion for the written word. This passion usually expresses itself through skillful communications that make a point, with pure and powerful language.

Children are often more expressive than adults, having not yet learned to be self-conscious. Whether we grew up playing with mud pies or rockets, each child felt a connection with inborn artistic talent. As adults, we should value these gifts, without assuming that our ability to communicate makes us skillful at all forms of writing.

For example, an office assistant may be great at composing newsletters, yet unskillful at PR writing and press pitching. A CEO may enjoy sketching out articles, yet be ineffective at wording said articles to attract the attention of local or national editors.

A professional writer has paid their dues. They know how to write effectively because they’ve been doing it for a long time and know what works.

In short, although everyone can hone an innate ability to write, becoming a specialist in specific fields of writing is the result of experience and study. So, rejoice in your writerly abilities. But, be wise enough to hire a specialist when it comes to those vital ads, infomercials or proposals that make or break your business!

A Powerful Prologue

A powerful prologue can make or break your book. Although most prologues are considered unnecessary these days, there are some prologues that "hook" the reader with images and emotions. Read the following example and compare it to prologues that others have written. You will find it exceptionally attractive to readers that scan the first few pages prior to purchase.

PROLOGUE
A Silence of Three Parts

IT WAS NIGHT AGAIN. The Waystone Inn lay in silence, and it was a silence of three parts.

The most obvious part was a hollow, echoing quiet, made by things that were lacking. If there had been a wind it would have sighed through the trees, set the inn’s sign creaking on its hooks, and brushed the silence down the road like trailing autumn leaves. If there had been a crowd, even a handful of men inside the inn, they would have filled the silence with conversation and laughter, the clatter and clamor one expects from a drinking house during the dark hours of night. If there had been music…but no, of course there was no music. In fact there were none of these things, and so the silence remained.

Inside the Waystone a pair of men huddled at one corner of the bar. They drank with quiet determination, avoiding serious discussions of troubling news. In doing this they added a small, sullen silence to the larger, hollow one. It made an alloy of sorts, a counterpoint.

The third silence was not an easy thing to notice. If you listened for an hour, you might begin to feel it in the wooden floor underfoot and in the rough, splintering barrels behind the bar. It was in the weight of the black stone hearth that held the heat of a long dead fire. It was in the slow back and forth of a white linen cloth rubbing along the grain of the bar. And it was in the hands of the man who stood there, polishing a stretch of mahogany that already gleamed in the lamplight.

The man had true-red hair, red as flame. His eyes were dark and distant, and he moved with the subtle certainty that comes from knowing many things.

The Waystone was his, just as the third silence was his. This was appropriate, as it was the greatest silence of the three, wrapping the others inside itself. It was deep and wide as autumn’s ending. It was heavy as a great river-smooth stone. It was the patient, cut-flower sound of a man who is waiting to die.

When you distill human elements into your prologue, personal details that intrigue, you guarantee that readers carry your book from the shelf to the cash register. Determine what appeals most to your audience, then include those elements in your prologue. This will ensure a powerful loyalty and interest in your book for both familiar and unfamiliar readers.

Your Three Minute Miracle

When you're stuck, when your writing sense has run dry, try this three minute miracle to get words flowing again.

For the first minute, close your eyes. Imagine that you're blind. When you can't see, what senses become paramount? Then, open your eyes and write down this experience. How did you think and feel for that sixty seconds?

For the second minute, plug your ears. When you can't hear, what happens to your world? Imagine, being deaf for your entire life. What would your existence be like? Envision it, then write it down.

For your third minute, select one of the remaining senses and imagine your life without it. What if you couldn't taste, feel or smell. What if your spiritual senses did not exist?
What if you had no imagination? If you couldn't write with your hands? Imagine it then put pen to paper and record your experience.

These may seem like nightmarish scenarios, but that does not have to be the case. In your mind, other senses may rise and shine, taking over with powers that make up for the sense that is missing.

The point is to use your imagination to experience life without senses that you take for granted.
Each of your senses is a miracle. Without them, what would you do?

Asking these questions acts as a reset button for your writing sense. Try this three minute miracle. Afterward, you may write with more power than ever before!

 

When Content is Key

Quality content is key to drawing readers into your book or story. Almost half of those that used to read have been distracted by alternate sources of entertainment over the last three decades, reducing the pool of fans that used to follow specific authors. Our remaining readers are much more refined. The depth and breadth of education has honed their sophistication and discernment, when selecting literature.

In fact, it’s never been more vital for a writer to write well.

With this in mind, think about the following advice for building great content. 1) Write a lot. Prolific writers are much more likely to hit it big with their works. More books on the shelf translate directly into more sales at the register. But, there is another benefit. The more you write the better you get at writing. Think of yourself as an Olympic athlete. Practice really does make perfect. 2) Select an editor with a mindset that matches your own. Just because you’re a good writer doesn’t mean you’re a good editor. Even if you edit for a living, it’s wise to hire someone else to edit your work. Why? Because personal literary works are the hardest things to view objectively. So, hire an editor. A good one! 3) Learn about and use social media.  A great book for those of us that are social media challenged is The Digital Handshake. Written in simple, easily understood language, this book will walk you through every marketing scenario that may confront you on the web.

By far, the most important counsel is to write every day. Make sure that each moment possible is utilized for the development of your talent. Only then can you rest assured that your content is the best you have to offer. 

Write What You Are

Sometimes budding writers don’t know what or who to write about. If you’re stymied by a lack of inspiration in the “what or who” categories, take a moment to imagine yourself in the story, both as a character and as someone experiencing the new world you desire to create.

Many authors have fielded questions about which character is their character. The truth is that the writer is every character, from philosopher to villain to magician to hero. When you allow your mind to “become” a character, you can see, think, feel and do (in your imagination) what that character would do.

This is a popular technique with actors. It’s not enough to know your lines and take your mark. You must have a running dialogue in your head while delivering your lines, a dialogue that gives “meatiness” to your character and meaning to their words and choices.

This kind of mental fingerprint makes a character real, to both author and reader. It is easier to develop such knowledge about character if we stop worrying, scribbling and trying to meet deadlines.

Relax, lock yourself in the bathroom, and find a way to connect with your inner self where interruptions are more rare than common. When you do this, the “what and who” information you need will simply flow into your mind, with harmony and fascination.

Then, you can clearly and powerfully write what you are!